Tuesday, June 21, 2016

Rainbow Throw Up

Ello, everyone! Genie here with Page 28! Huzzah!

Fun fact time! Remember how I said that I scrapped all the preplanned dialogue for Page 27, because I ended up wanting that moment to be silent and speechless?

Well, I put that dialogue into this page!

The lines about how Oz looks like Mt. Hill if a rainbow were to throw up on it was originally going to be Genie's first reaction the moment she came out of the tent. If anything, it came pretty close, right?

Let's see if we'll run into any other script changes. On to Page 29!

Until then,

Genie

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